Friday, September 28, 2012

Job #1- Line Illuminator

     "He dug his fingers into the sand; threw it over himself in handfuls and audibly blessed it. It looked like diamonds, rubies, emeralds; he could think of nothing beautiful which it did not resemble. The trees upon the bank were giant garden plants; he noted a definite order in their arrangement, inhaled the fragrance of their blooms. A strange, roseate light shone through the spaces among their trunks and the wind made in their branches the music of aeolian harps. He had no wish to perfect his escape-was content to remain in that enchanting spot until retaken." (Chapter 3)

     In this passage, Peyton had just been caught in a vortex and was thrown upon the gravel next to the stream. He is beginning to see things in a different light as he exits the river. To him, the sand looks like precious jewels. Tossing it over himself, he believes it is the most beautiful thing he has ever seen. Then, as Peyton looks up, he sees the forest which looks to him like a giant garden. A rosy light is shining through the trees as the wind rustles through branches making the music of harps. This place to him is perfect and enchantingly beautiful. Completely content, he has no desire to try to escape and would rather remain there until he was found.
     The next passage says that when a bullet whizzes through the trees above him, his head rouses him from his dream. He then jumps up and runs into the forest. This gives the impression that he had merely dreamt of the magical spot and was now awake again, when actually it all is a "dream".
     

7 comments:

  1. A dream within a dream. Sounds like Inception.

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  2. Hmm very true..I hadn't thought of that till now. It's confusing because it says the gunshot wakes him from his dream, so it makes you think the part of him trying to run home is real.

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    1. And then the guy falls asleep on a road and the author wakes him up at his gate? Really Bierce?

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    2. Agh update! I just read your second job and it definitely answers what I just asked. Since this was a dream, it could have went, gradually, from his walking, to his being at his gate. His feet no longer being on the road could just mean his senses from that part of the dream were leaving and changing to those of the next day. Wow literature is deceiving!

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    3. When it says that the bullet arouses him from his dream, it makes you ask questions about what is going on. Is he actually escaping from his enemies? Or is he really just still dreaming on the bridge?

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  3. Yes, I had thought of that when I wrote Job 2, but It seemed odd because in this case it was a daydream and Inception deals mainly with genuine, highly sedated dreams :)

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  4. good insight about the dream within a dream thing i didn't notice that before. And of course good job on all the other stuff too

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